The Lost Heiress
CHAPTER 1-part 1
It was an October evening. Sunlight still
hadn't left the day as Christine walked through the woods, crushing fallen
leaves under her feet. The sound of it brought back memories, memories of
bright green grass soaking sunshine, of a wooden see-saw that carried them up
into the air and back to the ground, just as life would when the gentleness of
childhood toughened. The laughter of her long-lost companion – raw and brisk,
torn at the edges, crumbled like old paper, echoing down the dimly lit passages
of her memory-the memory of her doe-eyed sister, who loved trees, who ran wild
like a summer breeze on the same grounds the lifeless trees now looked upon.
The trees die a strange kind of death, they come alive by spring, her sister
wouldn't. Christine's father had once told her, “Men live once and die a
million times as they do.” She hadn't known what he meant until the day she saw
her little sister, Elli lie dead, enveloped in white sheets. She had died the kind
of death that wouldn't come undone by spring, the kind of death you die only
once. No one knew, Christine died that day too, the kind of death men die a
million times, the kind of death she would die every day.
It was dark now. Autumn fog was gathering
around her, Christine heard sounds, like there was something alive in the
forest. The trees stretched out their branches in strange, sad shapes, curling
in the mist. She quickened her pace, mother often said there were things in the woods, things she'd rather not run into.
Something moved. The sound of hurried steps on dry leaves brushed against her.
She looked around through the dense white mist. Something denser, something
whiter moved towards her, past the dead trees, past the dying ones, crunching leaves as it moved.
It was a man, a very old man. Loose white
cloth hung shapelessly from his body. His straight white beard came down to his
chest. He had green eyes, stern green eyes. They shone through the mist with a
strange light. A shiver ran down Christine's body. She didn't move, couldn't.
He came closer, the wrinkles in his face moved, the lines around his mouth
stretched, his thin, pale lips parted, “Anala!”
-------- to be continued
Painting & story by Ritoja
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ReplyDeleteLoved the writeup and the painting
ReplyDeleteDarun
ReplyDeleteOh ho ... This is going to be something big ... I smell. Beautiful is the word. Love to Brishti.
ReplyDeleteOshadharon!! Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written!
ReplyDeleteWonderful-looking forward to the rest now
ReplyDeleteWonderful,looking forward to the rest now ,excellent photo
ReplyDeleteLovely! Will wait for more!
ReplyDeleteVery nice.... Sayantani
ReplyDeleteI’m in 2 minds about which is better - the picture drawn by hand or the one painted with words. Sayam
ReplyDeleteBeautiful story and superb photography
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ReplyDeleteWonderful writing! Rajdeep.
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Waiting eagerly for the next episode. Superb painting. Loved it
ReplyDeleteSeems very interesting. Beautiful painting -can’t move my eyes
ReplyDeletepicturization of the surrounding and its analogy to human life.....very smooth and vivid
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ReplyDeleteAwesome painting and engrossing storyline..... Great going, Bristi....
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ReplyDeleteWow Ritoja the expectation is built up can't wait for the edition. Amazing
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