The Lost Heiress (chapter 1 part 2)
Christine was shaken all over as his voice cut through the frozen silence. She took several steps back, she didn't know what he meant, it was just the fierceness in his voice, the urgency. He called out again, “Anala! Anala!” The wrinkles on the man's forehead deepened, “Do not be scared dear princess, I'm a friend, a very old one.” Something like a smile had appeared on his face. Christine still couldn't speak. “I’m Abner.” he said, “You don't know me but I'm here to tell you who you really are.”
“What?” her voice was shaky.
“Sit with me dear princess, will you? There's so much to tell you, and so little time. Sit with me.”
“No.” Christine half whispered half screamed, a muddle of sharp breaths and frenzied heartbeats. Something about this man scared her, something in the way his green eyes looked, something! The mist seemed to be closing up on her, she took brisk backward steps.
“Don't be afraid, please, I'm a frie-”
Christine had started to run, with all her might, she rushed through the mist. The man's voice called out behind her, “Anala! Please stop! Don't run away. You still don't know who you are.”
She didn't stop until she was out of the woods. The mist floated through the dark street like smoke. She quickened her pace, didn't stop walking till she was home. Her mother opened the door, heavy breathing and brisk words filling up the silence.
“How many times have I warned you dear? Don't you know how dangerous it is? You should never go wandering about in the woods this late!” Mother's eyebrows were high up in her forehead, the loose skin on her tired cheeks pink. Christine didn't have anything to say. Like so many times before, she just walked past her mother, through the yellow corridor into her room. Their house smelled of old things, musty old things. Ever since their father had left, to live with another woman, Mother had been very quiet, like she was fading into the chipped paint on the walls, and every other memory the house reeked of had slowly began to be a burden on the hope tomorrow had once promised to bring.
Christine lay on her bed, her eyes tracing
the cracks on the ceiling. Her mind wandered through the misty woods, craving
the secrets curled in its branches, in search of the old man with stern green
eyes, his voice echoing through the haze, “I'm here to tell you who you really
are.”
Who you really are!!
------------------------------to be continued-----------Story & painting by Ritoja
Beautiful Story telling along with the Painting
ReplyDeletebeautiful....eagerly waiting for the continuation....
ReplyDeleteThis is the perfect combo of GoT, LOTR and Stranger Things. Well done Ritoja for getting the blend just right. Sayam.
ReplyDeleteFantastic...this was engaging ..will wait for the next part. Great going I should say.
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ReplyDeleteLovely storyline complementing the beautiful artwork.....
ReplyDeleteAhhh ... There drops in the 2nd Chapter. This is awesome.
ReplyDeleteArindam.
This is awesome! Well done Brishti!
ReplyDeleteWow !! That's an engaging read
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ReplyDeleteThanks for keeping us on tenterhooks. Keep it up Ritoja. Saumabha
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ReplyDeleteFantastic painting first of all.. And brilliantly written.. Keep it up Brishti.. ππ½
ReplyDeleteBeautiful painting and a lovely story!
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ReplyDeleteBeautiful amalgamation of varied creative traits - Sayantan Mitra
ReplyDeleteLovely ,thoroughly enjoyed the story and the painting,looking forward to the next one now
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Wowwow... loving it.. superb painting.. n painted with words..
ReplyDeleteSharmistha auntie.
Fabulous Ritoja. Now really dying to know who she really is. Anirbid
ReplyDeleteGood going , quite interesting π
ReplyDeleteThe writing paints a picture in itself. The beautiful painting tells a story too…waiting for the next part with anticipation!
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